I ended up waiting for Yuletide to open and gobbled up my fic at once. I really liked it and can recommend it:

Title: Not Quite Vor
Fandom: The Vorkosigan Saga
Rating: Teen
Genre: Character Study
Word Count: 1943 words
Characters: Olivia Koudelka, Dono Vorrutyer, Ludmilla "Drou" Droushnakovi, Donna Vorrutyer
Pairings: Olivia Koudelka/Dono Vorrutyer
Warnings: None
Summary: Deportment isn't the sum of a girl's education when she grows up Koudelka. Few people stop to remember that quieter than Martya or gentler than Delia doesn’t mean particularly gentle or quiet.

I also got a very positive, several paragraph's long review on my gift fic, so I think I can safely assume that my recipicent really liked the story! And I think my treat-ee liked the treat as well. I hope all my fellow Yuletiders got fic they liked too!

I've been reading around today, but quite slowly as I'm determined to review everything I read on Yuletide. I have a massive to-read list right now!